This Star is a bit Salty

Chapter 349 There is only one fly in the ointment

After reading the whole poem, all the contestants let out a long sigh. This poem is so well written that it can definitely be said to be a classic.

If only they could write poetry like this. Unfortunately, this is destined to be impossible, not to mention them, even a famous poet like Gu Yuan might not be able to write it, right?

After a long sigh, they became excited again. They were so lucky to be able to witness the birth of this poem on the spot.

It was a very correct decision to sign up for the competition this time.

Not only did Li Han make two shots, but the second shot turned out to be such a classic, which they didn't expect before.

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This time to participate in the competition, it is more worthwhile than he thought before. There was a song "Baitou Chan" before, and now there is another "Thinking". The two poems have similarities, and they are both classics. Can they be regarded as sister poems?

Witnessing the birth of the sister poem of "Bai Tou Yin" at the scene, this can be used to brag in the future, which will definitely make many people envious and jealous.

"Baitou Yin" is a poem written for Zhuo Wenjun, and the description of "Something Thinking" is more delicate than "Baitou Yin". The girl in the poem's heart and actions when facing emotional betrayal are more rich and vivid.

In terms of artistic value alone, "Thinking" is probably higher than "Baitou Yin".

All the contestants were stunned.

However, this poem also seems to have a problem. That just doesn't seem complete. In other words, it seems that it has not been written yet, and there is still the following text.

The last line of the poem, "The East needs to be learned in an instant."

The translation means that maybe, when the sun rises in the east tomorrow, the answer will be known.

After venting her hatred, the girl remembered the sweet time when she was dating her lover, and she felt more and more conflicted. She didn't know what to do?

She thought to herself, "Maybe when the sun rises in the east tomorrow, I'll figure it out?"

This is how the whole poem ends.

When the sun rose the next day, did the girl really want to understand? There is no answer given later.

This is very itchy!

Did the girl really want to understand? What is she going to do? You make it clear! Thus ends the whole poem,

Isn't it distressing?

This is not writing a novel, and the answer will be revealed in the next chapter. This is a poem. When the whole poem is over, there is no answer.

It seems that Li Han intends to let them figure out the answer by themselves.

Pit people!

The players couldn't help but feel a little sullen.

Of course, although the ending is pitiful, it will not affect the classic of this poem in the slightest. This is a poem, not a novel, and I have to explain the ending clearly to you?

There's nothing wrong with ending like this as a poem.

The players sighed in their hearts, and Gu Yuan, Tang Zaisheng, Yu Qiu and others also sighed.

Tang Shengsheng was a little excited. "Thinking" is definitely a classic and definitely qualified to be a sister poem to "Bai Tou Yin".

Today, I invited Li Han to write "Baitou Yin" for Wenjun's former residence, and he even harvested a sister poem. This is definitely a huge surprise!

Tang Zaisheng pondered in his heart that after the competition, he must invite Li Han to inscribe the song "Thinking", and show it together with "Bai Tou Yin", the impact will definitely be greater.

As for Li Han's current manuscript, of course, Tang Shengsheng also wants it very much. But he knew that he would definitely not be able to compete with Gu Yuan.

This is a poetry competition organized by the Provincial Poetry Association. The original manuscript is collected by the Provincial Poetry Association, which is indeed more reasonable.

Of course, the premise is that Li Han is willing to contribute the original manuscript.

In Tang Shengshen's opinion, Li Han should not refuse to submit the manuscript. The Provincial Poetry Association made a lot of money this time.

Gu Yuan naturally knew that the Provincial Poetry Association had made a lot of money this time, and commented with a smile: "The whole poem of "Thinking" can be divided into three parts: lovesickness, decision and hesitation. These three parts constitute the It describes the trilogy of a girl's heart from falling in love, falling in love, and then to nostalgia. The layers are clear and intricate, and the emotions are ups and downs and rhythm. Mr. Li Han's shot is really extraordinary."

Yu Qiu also said: "pulling, destroying, burning, and raising are all movements that are done in one go and neatly. The image of a bloody girl who dares to love and hate, love and hate is clear, love is like fire, and hate is like dynamite. Mr. Han's poem is definitely the best of the best."

After hearing this, Li Han repeatedly expressed his humility.

At this time, the on-site staff responsible for sharing the scene is sharing the song "Thinking" on the Internet.

online.

Poets and poetry lovers who are paying attention to the competition have long been waiting.

They believe that Li Han's works are by no means comparable to those of the contestants. After seeing the top ten works of the contestants, they are now very eager to see. How big is the gap between the top ten works and Li Han's works?

Finally, they waited.

"Thinking"!

After just reading a few sentences, they already had the answer.

How big is the gap? I don't know, anyway, I don't know how many orders of magnitude are in the middle.

There's no comparison at all.

Poets and poetry lovers on the Internet began to become excited. Li Han's poems are always amazing, and they are never ordinary.

After reading the whole poem, they, like the contestants on the scene, had their own emotions in their hearts.

Then I felt very regretful that I did not witness the birth of such a poem with my own eyes at the scene.

Then, there was no clear answer at the end of the poem, which made them feel very sorry, and they also wanted to know, after the sun rose the next day, did the girl really want to understand?

In fact, it is not uncommon for this kind of poem to not give an answer at the end, and there are many poems like this.

It's just that there is no answer at the end of the rest of the poems, so there is no answer. They don't want to know the answer urgently, and even if they can't know the answer, they won't feel sorry in their hearts.

But this poem is different. If you don't know the answer to this poem, you will feel quite regretful in your heart.

Just because this poem is so well written, the image of the girl who is so infatuated and dares to love and hate, love and hate clearly, love like fire, and hate like dynamite, is really outstanding, and the impression is too deep. Just lingering.

If you don't know the answer to this, it will make people feel very uncomfortable!

But unfortunately there is no answer.

well! This is the only flaw in this poem.

However, although there is a fly in the ointment, the discussion about "Sisi" among poets and poetry lovers on the Internet is becoming more and more lively.

"Thinking" is also spreading more and more widely. Many poets and poetry lovers who have not paid attention to this competition before have also noticed this poem.

"Thinking"? I wipe! whose poem is this? It's so well written, it's a classic!

What the hell! It turned out to be Li Han's poem, no wonder... Wait, you say this poem is a poem written by Li Han during the ongoing Wenjun's Former Residence Poetry Competition? Or the topic of the fifth session of the competition?

Of course I know about Wenjun Poetry and Poetry Contest, but I just haven't paid attention to it now. I'm going to wait until the end of the competition to learn about it.

Unexpectedly, Li Han actually made a move. Fortunately, the game is not over yet, I will pay attention immediately.

In this way, more and more poets and poetry lovers began to pay attention.

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