Red Heart Survey

Writing is hard work, especially long stories.

The writing of this volume should be regarded as the completion of the established plan.

After this volume, I was finally able to discuss the creation of the protagonist.

Time-travel and rebirth are two very powerful ideas, and its greatest advantage for online novels is that it allows the author to skip the growth process of the protagonist and directly present a protagonist's personality to the readers. Moreover, with the "memory" that can be added at any time, various branch lines can be added at any time, and the logic itself can be completely ignored, which saves a lot of energy!

This is wonderful.

I never mean it is bad, in fact I did not choose these two ideas, just because it does not conform to the logic of the self-consistent world of the Heart Survey, that's all.

This is not a world without extraordinary powers. After rebirth and crossing, don't worry about it, just treat it as a miracle.

In a world like the Red Heart Survey, it can be done, it can be detected, it can be explained, and just like that, it can't be used.

I want to create a real Xianxia world, which must first be logically established. If I can't even explain the protagonist's origin clearly, how can I convince readers that this is a real world?

Choose to create an original protagonist, a living person in the living Chixin Sky Survey world.

To really start from scratch, create a protagonist, and write about his changes and growth, it is actually hard work and hard to please.

For example, many people said why the protagonist was cheated by Dong A, why the three things were led by the nose by Bai Lian... Is the protagonist stupid?

For Dong A, Jiang Wang's psychology has a process from vigilance and alertness to acceptance and trust. The details of the psychological changes, so far only one reader has such a comment. Give me some comfort.

The protagonist was born in a small town in a small country, with limited vision and knowledge.

In many cases, it is not that he is not smart, but that he cannot see so high, so far!

The son of a medicine merchant, how can he gain a foothold in the world and judge state affairs? Can sitting in a well watch the sky?

Unlike the first volume, which was more of a storyline and a spectator of events, in the second volume, the protagonist has grown to a certain extent, his vision has been broadened, and his understanding of the world has been tempered, including employment, including cultivation... all aspects have been improved. Logical growth, but also in this volume, more as a participant in the event.

The protagonist's influence is expanding.

At the beginning of the second volume, I roughly showed the outline of this great world, represented by Yunguo and Youguo, followed Jiangwang's Wanli away, and introduced Luoguo on the water, the city of unredempted sinners, etc. place.

The second half of the entire second volume is basically deconstructing the demise of a kingdom.

Why did Yang Kingdom perish?

Text, calendar, all lost.

Bureaucrats at all levels are selfish, from the small pavilion chief to the city lord, to the county guard, and even the entire Yangting ruler, all have their own ideas and their own interests.

There are even some Yang people who have long been spiritual Qi people.

Qi State's penetration of Yang State is all-round. Politics, economy, culture, military... so much so that when the Yang Kingdom fights against the black catastrophe, it still needs Qi's Four Seas Business Alliance to undertake the transportation of supplies.

And the root of all this is that the Yang Kingdom is on the side of Qi, a powerful country in the world.

Its fate has long been sealed.

Yang Jiande was fighting against fate, but he failed.

This country is not without heroes, from the old Mr. Qin who is so plain, to the veteran Ji Cheng...

The history of Tianxiong Ji's demise can be regarded as a microcosm of the history of Yang Kingdom's struggle.

The son dies, the grandson dies again, the man dies, the woman dies again. The young died, and the old followed.

In the end, the family was full of loyalty, and even the pile of corpses could not withstand the torrent.

The sadness of the country's broken mountains and rivers, the tragedy of the death of the country, and the sadness of powerlessness.

I think I wrote it out.

...

also.

The many foreshadowings left in the first volume have also been unraveled in the second volume.

For example, the mouse face is not that powerful, why can it still be the head of the twelve bone face?

For example, why Mingzhu can warn Jiang Wang.

For example, the ghost gate that Zhang Linchuan took away in the battle of Fenglin City, and the tears shed by Wang Changji... In the second volume, the Bone God's will to come to the world was buried...

all kinds.

There are some details that readers may just glance over, but they are my efforts to enrich this world.

For example, some slang and common sayings are actually original ones that fit the Chixin world.

For example, the slang words in Yuecheng Prison, such as "relaxing", "boiling oil", and "private rooms", are actually fabricated by the author himself. In order to make this world more decent, even if it is only a very small branch, The fleeting scene...

These subtle efforts are costly and ineffective, and may not be loved by readers, but I have spent a lot of hard work, but I still do it.

I am easy-going in life and perfectionist in writing.

For the entire second volume, I am quite satisfied with the creative part alone.

Taking the lapis lazuli vein as the entry point, Hu's family, and then to Mo's family, a mine, a town, a city, a region, and a country are intertwined, from small to large, there is no useless pen.

The competition between Chongxuansheng and Chongxuanzun is one line, and the various demands inside the Bone Road are another line.

There are two places that are more impressive.

One is the secret realm of Tianfu. Although it is reversed and reversed again and again, I feel that I have been tossing and moving very wonderfully. However, many readers reported that the secret realm was not written too long. From another aspect, it also shows that this secret realm is very popular.

But I think... the end is over, what should be expressed has been expressed, and the line that should be buried has also been buried, so let's just expose it, no matter how wonderful it is. Watering is pointless.

One is when I was deconstructing the disintegration of Yangguo from multiple angles, before the peak at the end of the volume, some readers expressed that they were unwilling to see the shattering of bricks and tiles. I feel bored, confused, and don't understand what the author wants to express.

In order not to affect the reader's pleasure of reading, I can't explain it.

But at the end of writing, all questions must have been answered.

I would like to ask, if there is no shaking of the foundation, would it be too abrupt for the building to fall?

The shattering of that tile and brick is the prelude to the collapse of the whole house.

They are symphonic and progressive together, and complete the finale.

In this way, when the entire Yang Kingdom is finally destroyed, so many readers can be moved.

I have tried my best to make the foreshadowing and foreshadowing more exciting, but it still seems to lack balance and not catch people enough.

I hope the third volume can do better-if there is enough energy.

...

In the process of writing the second volume.

Anxiety has always tormented me.

The anxiety that started when I was ridiculed by the crowd when I wrote the fifth chapter of the Red Heart Survey has been tormenting me until now.

I often break down while encouraging myself.

The spirit is going back and forth between the state of collapse and bloodshed.

In the end, I still haven't broken it once, and I don't know how I persisted.

Now the two volumes have been completely written according to my plan, with a total of more than 800,000 words, and I finally have an explanation for the readers.

I can say sorry to anyone.

Hope to sleep soundly tonight.

...

My grades are still poor, I hope everyone can give me some strength.

It's really hard.

at last.

The name of the next volume is, "Break through the galaxy and the end of the world".

It comes from a song "The Road Is Difficult" written by myself.

"The road is difficult, the road is difficult, this body only goes to a higher place."

"Climbing to the sky and grasping the moon is not an exaggeration, breaking through the galaxy is the end of the world."