It Would Be Great If I Could Be a Copywriter

Chapter 192 Optimized version of

Two days passed.

The enthusiasm for the ending of "Death Note" has declined, but most people are still talking about it.

There are also some readers who are beginning to look forward to new works that still have no news at all.

"Ah, I'm going to die without reading Teacher Mao Xuewang's cartoons!"

"The second day without a new work, I miss the author."

"My roommate said... Forget about persecuting the roommate, in fact, it's the master himself who wants to create new works."

"Reminder for more! The author will publish a new work soon!"

"Mr. Maoxuewang, if you don't release any new works within three days, I will come to your door to have an in-depth exchange with you."

"I am afraid that the in-depth communication before is not extreme sports."

"Once you open your mouth, you're gay."

A group of readers eager for new works are like young women who are dissatisfied with desire, groaning frantically in the comment area.

In fact, Su Chen and his two assistants are already working hard on the draft.

Since Feng Yu and Yin Sha are still newcomers, "Death Note" is better, but the drafts of other painting methods need Su Chen to revise and give a lot of pointers.

Therefore, it is said that there are three people together, but most of them are Su Chen's painting, and Yinsha and Fengyu are just studying and observing independently.

And, it's already more than July now.

Qingman's voting results came out, and "Violet Evergarden" took the first place with an astonishing number of votes, standing out from the crowd.

For this reason, he will take some time to go to Shanghai in the near future, and go to the headquarters of Leijian Library to discuss matters related to the release of physical books.

In addition to the promised Lightning Weekly comics, it is best to bring the manuscripts of the physical comics, otherwise it will be too troublesome to run around.

"Teacher Mao Xuewang, do you drink coffee?"

There was a creaking sound of the door opening, and Yinsha came in from the studio on the second floor of the pastry shop with a cup of coffee.

"No thanks." Su Chen held the brush seriously.

"oh."

After a while.

"Teacher Mao Xuewang, do you want some snacks?" Yinsha pushed the door open again.

"no thank you."

After a while.

"Teacher Maoxuewang, you want to..."

"No thanks, but what exactly do you want to do today?" Su Chen looked up at her suspiciously.

It's really good to enjoy the feeling of being a leader, but...

This is serving tea and pouring water. Aren't you being courteous for nothing?

"I want to take a look at the comic content of the new work." Yinsha confessed.

"Yes, yes, but this one is going to be submitted to Penguin Comics, are you sure you want to read it?" Su Chen raised his eyebrows.

"Um."

Yinsha picked up the drawing.

On the other side, Feng Yu, who had been observing secretly, also came over, obviously also very interested in Su Chen's new work.

in the manuscript.

The comic he chose to draw is a witty battle,

A plot-oriented novella titled "The Rebellious Lelouch".

"The Rebellious Lelouch", also known as "The Rebellious Lelouch", is an original animation that was serialized in 2006 in the previous life. Later, because the original work was too popular, it also derived comics and novels.

The script and screenwriter are on the first floor of Dakochi, such as Iron Fortress, Guilty Crown, these familiar works are all from this guy.

This work was available on station b before, but it was taken off the shelves in China a few years ago because it involved political content.

The story mainly tells the story of Neon, who was invaded by the Holy Britannian Empire and subjugated—in the 11th district, the black prince Lelouch of Britannia who is determined to crush the empire, and the white knight Suzaku who insists on justice, set off a battle. A story of great change.

This work was considered a classic with the same name as Death Note in those days.

In foreign animation exhibitions, it was even awarded the original animation award.

It's just that by 2020, there will be many new users who have never heard of it.

After all, it premiered in 2006 and ended in the second season in 2008. It is already considered a long-standing ancient masterpiece. Even if the plot is not mentioned, the painting skills are enough to dissuade some viewers.

It's the same as jojo, there's nothing to say about the content, there are countless famous scenes, but some viewers just can't accept jojo's muscular painting style.

Similarly, Lulu Xiuli also made some well-known stalks, such as "It's not me, it's this world" and "If you don't have the awareness to be killed, you don't have the right to kill" and so on.

Speaking of this, it is worth mentioning that many people think that the first stalk comes from Tokyo Ghoul, but in fact, both Lu Luxiu and Cheng Ge said it earlier than Kaneki.

In short, the small flaws in the painting style are not worth mentioning. In the process of carrying it, Su Chen will simply optimize the painting style so that it does not look so persuasive, and then unfold the specific story for the readers.

What Yinsha and Fengyu saw was the optimized version of "The Rebellious Lu Luxiu", the proportions of the characters have been perfectly modified, and Su Chen also modified the death-pointed chin that can be used for farming in the original work. So exaggerated.

The two quickly turned to the first page and began to read.

The characters drawn by Su Chen are quite handsome.

Sure enough, as expected of Teacher Mao Xuewang, he can easily do things that we can't.

If you don't look at the plot and just look at the painting skills, even us painters feel ashamed.

Is this the top cartoonist? Love it. Love it.

Yinsha and Fengyu's eyes lit up.

Continue to read, the first chapter "The Day the Demon King was Born" doesn't have much content, but the plot is simple and clear. It is the male protagonist Lu Luxiu, a down-and-out prince who was exiled with his sister to the neon as a bargaining chip. He hates the empire. In a life-threatening emergency, by chance, he obtained the special ability of "absolute order". After using the ability to kill a group of soldiers, he decided to take revenge on the empire.

The simple and rough opening plot does not lose some of the more prominent highlights.

For example, the setting of the background, the characterization of the protagonist, and even the golden finger that was given, Yinsha thinks it is very good.

Especially at the end, the scene where Lu Luxiu, who has just acquired the ability, uses the ability of "absolute obedience" to order a group of soldiers to commit suicide is even more shocking.

"Lelouchi Vi Britannia ordered, you guys, die!"

So much so that Feng Yu, a fan of middle school two, stood up excitedly and put up poss like this, covering his eyes like Lu Luxiu in the comics, imitating loudly.

However, because of her exquisite and lovely appearance, imitating her will not only not be a bit domineering, but also a little silly and cute.

Su Chen and Yinsha couldn't help laughing.

After realizing the reaction of the two, Feng Yu blushed belatedly.

After reading the first chapter carefully.

Yinsha Meiyan commented: "Teacher, the idea of ​​your comic is not bad, it feels no worse than "Death Note"."

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