It Would Be Great If I Could Be a Copywriter

Lie down in front of the computer.

After chatting with Xin Lan about the "Death Note" manuscript, Su Chen, as a diligent author, immediately began to explode the follow-up chapters of "Violet Eternal Garden".

According to this sales momentum, as long as I work harder and control the plot well, the day when the physical book will be released is really not far away.

In order to surprise the readers at the beginning, Su Chen made some magical changes in the previous works, adjusted the order of the chapters, and put Ann's story, which was supposed to appear in the second chapter, into the first chapter.

So now he needs to write the first chapter of the original work.

That is the content of the seventh chapter in the anime, the only blank title.

In the novel, it is the title of "The Novelist and the Auto-Memory Doll".

This chapter tells the story of a script novelist whose wife died of illness and his daughter died prematurely. Violet, who came to write the letter on behalf of him, fulfilled the agreement with him and his daughter, so she finally realized the importance of the agreement to people, and the loneliness of being unable to be by her side when the important person leaves.

Although it is not as amazing as the episode of Ann and his mother, it is no less tear-gassing than a tear-gas bomb.

Especially in the anime of the previous episode, there is also the famous scene of Violet walking on the lake, click on the seventh chapter at 16 minutes and 15 seconds, the whole process is high-energy and beautiful, and almost every frame can be taken as a wallpaper.

But now Su Chen has no way to restore those details.

He is just a writer of novels, not animation.

What he can do now is to put more effort into the illustrations, so that readers can feel as much as possible the shock of Violet walking on the lake in the original novel.

As for the arrangement of the novel's plot, how should I put it, Su Chen still intends to change it magically, kneading the animation and the original novel into one ball.

After all, the original work has a lot of flaws, and the animation has been changed too seriously, so Su Chen decided to compromise and advance with the plot of the original work, but the details are still based on the animation.

In short, it not only has the soul of the original work, but also absorbs the details and advantages of the anime. The entire enhanced version of "Violet Evergarden" has no flaws.

As for the follow-up, what should the major of Violet write...

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This is also a problem.

First of all, in the original work, the first volume is almost always playing guessing games with readers, letting readers know that there is such an important character, but in the book, life and death are uncertain, and it is not until the second volume that it is clearly stated that the major is not dead.

But it’s different in the animation of the original Grinder KyoAni. The Major was cool at the beginning, sacrificed in the war, and after the whole episode, it only existed in Violet’s memories.

So here comes the problem.

For Su Chen's class of porters, should the Shao Zuo get the boxed lunch?

The answer is of course yes!

Writing like this is a blade... Ahhh, writing like this is a masterpiece!

The first volume is in the same direction as the original book, as an old riddleman, he did not mention the life and death of the major until the end, and then the content at the beginning of the second volume is a fatal blow to the readers. The main line of the late anime,

Lightspeed is over.

This was Su Chen's plan.

Two volumes, more than a dozen chapters directly complete the "Eternal Garden of Violet".

Because the peak of this work, there are only two volumes. As for the other side stories, love stories, etc., in Su Chen's opinion, they are not as high as they were at the beginning (Of ​​course, it may also be a problem with domestic translation. Except for the first volume, the rest feels like a soulless machine flip).

The most ideal Violet in his heart is to follow the original novel in the first half, follow the main line of the anime in the second half, and finally have an open ending, leaving readers with unlimited imagination and a perfect curtain call.

After the decision was made, Su Chen quickly wrote out the draft of the second chapter, and then compared it with the content of the anime, and began to revise it.

After the finished product was finished, he yawned, threw the manuscript on Yuzu's QQ, picked up the drawing board, and started designing the illustrations for the second chapter.

Classic dual thread.

You will never guess what your favorite light novel writer is working part-time behind the scenes.

On the other hand, Yuzu at work quickly noticed the manuscript sent by Su Chen.

"The novelist and the automatic memory doll..."

Staring at the titles of the chapters, nodding her head in satisfaction, and thinking in her heart, "Teacher Xiaogui did not disappoint me", Yuzu began to review the manuscript.

As imagined, it is still a unit story that is comparable to tear gas and directly hits the soul.

It is said to be a ghostwriter, but Violet is more like a growing recorder, harvesting her own emotions from people's different emotions.

Unsurprisingly, but still heart-warming and memorable ending, Yuzu's eyes are moist again.

But this time it was much better than the first review.

If the first chapter expresses the mother's deep love for Ann, then the second chapter, with the novelist Oscar as the main character, expresses his father's dissatisfaction with the fact that he is no longer there. The thoughts of the daughter of the world.

The style of writing is still as delicate as drizzle, and the warm atmosphere is shaped so that Yuzu can hardly find any faults.

For other works, as long as the manuscript is handed in, the editor will pick and choose, requiring various revisions and deletions.

Only here in "Violet Eternal Garden", Yuzi is the most worry-free, the manuscript submitted is flawless, does not violate the rules, is not watery, is not white, and does not need any revision at all.

Now you only need to show it to the editor-in-chief, and after getting approval, you can go through the procedure and communicate with Mao Xuewang about the illustration.

Send a copy of the manuscript to the editor-in-chief.

However, what Yuzu doesn't know is that the editor-in-chief here is more attentive than her. She took out the manuscript and read it word by word for more than two hours, in order to help the little vampire point out the shortcomings, for fear that the quality of the work will decline. up.

As the editor-in-chief of an independent group of Leijian Library, of course he has read countless books, and he can easily point out the faults and deficiencies of new writers.

Because in theory.

An editor reading a book is completely different from a reader reading a book.

How should I describe this feeling?

If you are a person who has been an author, I am afraid you will understand this difference.

An author or editor, when reading a book, will always unconsciously start to analyze, how the various preparations of the work are, whether the writing is excellent, whether the plot arrangement is reasonable or not...

Like an occupational disease.

As a result, they can read books objectively without a strong sense of substitution, without deep involvement in the play, and thus pick out some flaws that even the authors of the books have not noticed.

It is difficult for those pure readers who read ten lines at a glance to notice these.

The editor-in-chief is now in such a reading mode.

Then……

Analyze it carefully from head to toe.

He was very shocked to find out.

He couldn't find any flaws in this work!

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