It Would Be Great If I Could Be a Copywriter

"Every day, every day, the same thing repeats...it's extremely boring..."

"This world is rotting..."

The editor-in-chief frowned: "Well, Xinlan, the review is the review, you don't have to read the contents of the comic..."

"Ah! I'm sorry!" Xinlan hurriedly apologized.

In the spacious office, all the editors of the first editorial team are cross-reviewing the first chapter of "Death Note".

After downloading the drawings, the editor-in-chief began to browse one by one.

The forty-page plot is neither too much nor too little.

It took ten minutes to read it carefully several times, and the editor-in-chief was very shocked.

The content of the whole first chapter is not sloppy, Mr. Mao Xuewang's character is very online, just a short opening sets up an extremely calm and intelligent image for the protagonist, and lays a lot of foreshadowing.

Especially at the end, after killing people and testing the authenticity of the Death Note, the protagonist decides to become an existence that erases all evil in the world, and even uses the note to kill all criminals to create a new world.

"Teacher Mao Xuewang's creativity is too strong." The editor-in-chief praised without hesitation, "The foreshadowing and setting of the first episode is definitely another masterpiece."

"But the problem is, just looking at the first episode, you can't tell it's a suspense manga at all."

Soon, there were comments from the editors of Cross-Review.

Indeed, in the setting of Death Note, you can kill people by writing your name, and you can also set up the killing process in detail. No matter how you look at it, it is the setting of Invincible Text.

In terms of suspense, is it possible that you will let the police arrest a murderer who kills people in such a short distance? Forced suspense?

Impossible, right?

How could the protagonist of Invincible Wen be caught by the police?

On the contrary, this is a bit like the setting of those heroes in some martial arts. The protagonist kills the wicked according to his own will.

It seems that there is nothing to do with suspense.

The editor-in-chief also thought of this.

But he has been very optimistic about Maoxuewang before, and now he is definitely willing to trust the other party.

So the editor-in-chief pondered for a while, and said: "There is indeed this hidden danger, but the setting of the first episode is very rigorous, which meets the standards of a suspenseful work, and the author is Maoxuewang, so I think we can do it right. There is hope for this work.”

"Then... editor-in-chief, what do you mean? Just pass the review now?"

"Is it a little too hasty?"

"Yeah, should we try to let Teacher Mao Xuewang revise it?"

A group of editors chirped and asked.

"No need!" The editor-in-chief waved his hand.

"Just go through the review directly, and then recommend it. With the strength of Teacher Maoxuewang, no matter how bad it is, it is impossible to collapse."

The powerful voice made all the editors look at each other.

Fine.

Anyway, you are the editor-in-chief, so I listen to you.

So the work passed the review at the speed of light, causing a wave of enthusiasm in the comic circle on the Internet.

The comment area of ​​"Ganwumeixiaoburied".

"What's the matter, Xiaobu just disappeared?"

"The second day of Xiaobu's permanent suspension, I miss you."

"Does anyone know the address of this dead eunuch? I'll send him some souvenirs."

"The one in front, if you want to send it to Xingkong, right?"

"One thing to say, Xingkong is a real dog. Teacher Maoxuewang doesn't paint Xiaobu, it's his fault."

"Where's your new pit? Didn't it come out today as promised?"

"Mao Xuewang went to paint suspense, my youth is over."

"Grandpa Qingjie climbs!"

The atmosphere in the entire comment area was very gloomy.

It can be seen that after Xiaobu permanently suspends publication, readers are more or less resentful.

then.

Suddenly someone refreshed Xia Maoxuewang's work page.

Then I saw an additional work displayed in the background.

"death Note"!

The man was so excited that he performed a laser dance on the spot.

And quickly remind everyone in Xiaobu's comment area.

"Look, everyone! Teacher Mao Xuewang's new work has been reviewed!"

"Damn it, it's really there!"

"The first chapter of Death Note is out!"

"I finally waited for you. Fortunately, I didn't give up."

"Where is it? Why didn't I see it?"

"Idiot, you can refresh it once."

"oh oh."

The comment area immediately boiled again.

The brother who just ended his youth, this time is faster than anyone else, he can't wait to open the first chapter of "Death Note", and read it with relish.

After this brother finished reading with a frown, he originally wanted to grab a sofa to get the first place, but he didn't expect that the comment area was already overcrowded.

Below, a large group of readers who have completed the drug test are bubbling to sign in.

The speed at which this kind of heat rises is outrageous!

"This first episode is really good! It's just that there are too few to watch."

"In front, forty pages are not enough. You see, I didn't expect it."

"The style has changed too much. Is Teacher Maoxuewang really okay?"

"Well, it's quite different from the last one, but it's still pretty good."

"Teacher Maoxuewang's creativity is against the sky 666"

"It's not true that some people think that Mao Xuewang can't draw suspense comics, right? No way, no way?"

"The beginning of this is amazing! The setting of Death Note is too awesome."

Someone discussed the plot and asked, "Uh, is this work considered suspenseful? The protagonist gets the notes, so won't he be invincible immediately? Where's the suspenseful plot?"

Many people replied below and participated in the discussion of the plot.

"Indeed, this opening is too dreamy. With Ye Shenyue's high dual quotient, and the Death Note can kill people in the air, I don't know what the follow-up plot can draw."

"Maybe the police arrested him?"

"Police? Impossible, Ye Shenyue is so incomprehensible, the police can't catch him at all, even if they catch him, there is no evidence."

"One thing to say and one thing to be sure. People just write a few words on the notebook. Could it be that writing is also breaking the law?"

"I like Ye Shenyue's character, her IQ is online and her mind is sober, and she looks very comfortable."

"The beginning of this comic is good, but can the subsequent author manage the plot?" Someone worried.

"That depends on how high the SQ of Teacher Maoxuewang is 2333"

Of course, apart from these fairly normal comments, there are still many people who express their regrets in the Death Note comment section.

"I raised Xiaobu for half a month, and then came back and told me to suspend the publication forever. I was stupid."

"The crispness of all these books is so decisive that people are frightened."

"Can you continue to draw Xiaobu, I really don't feel anything about Death Note."

"I only love Xiao Bu! If you don't draw Xiao Bu, your ticket is gone!"

However, when Su Chen saw these comments, he didn't panic at all.

Because it was clearly shown in the backstage that these resentful little readers all voted in a very honest manner.

Especially the reader who threatened to lose your votes cast eight votes in the background in one go!

Alas, I am so arrogant.

It's so cute.

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