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(81) Shiyu of Kasumigaoka: I gradually understand everything

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu didn't understand why Xia Yan let herself read these light novels.

In fact, as a light novelist, she has naturally heard of these light novels, all of which are the recent popular light novels of youth and daily love.

It belongs to a similar theme with her "Love Metronome".

Why did Mo Yan ask her to see these works?

Thinking of Xia Yan's previous "poor comments" on his own works, Xia Zhiqiu Shi Yuyin "Seven Nine Three" vaguely guessed his thoughts, so he took over these light novels and started to read.

After just reading a few pages, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu couldn't help frowning, and a hint of impatience appeared on her pretty face.

The writing is so bad.

The writing of the novel, basically only read the first chapter, you can see the seven seven eight eight.

Generally speaking, as long as the story can be told clearly, even if the writing is poor, the impact on the work will not be particularly large.

But Shiyu of Kasumigaoka is a light novelist with an excellent writing style, so reading these novels that are far inferior to his own, it will taste like chewing wax, and it will be very unpleasant to look at.

Sensing her dissatisfaction, Xia Yan smiled slightly and said softly, "Look at it.

"Okay, it's your job after all~

Playfully said something to ridicule Mo Yan, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu held back his temper and carefully observed several light novels in his hand.

As a fellow author, she knows exactly what Xia Yan wants to see, so she quickly finds the point.

Characters, plot, highlights, eye-catching content...

Looking at it, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's originally impatient face suddenly became solemn and serious.

Of course she didn't have a sense of crisis in competition, nor did she learn anything.

But she probably understood Xia Yan's evaluation of her own work.

It is true that her works are quite good in terms of writing and character building, and shameless boasting, there is no problem with saying a good light novel.

But....too common.

As Xia Yan commented, there is hardly any peculiarity, just like the most common daily love light novels on the market.

Almost all of her light novels have attributes that other light novels have.

Similarly, her light novels have attributes, and other light novels are not lacking,

This is obviously the reason why Xia Yan gave her light novels no favorable reviews.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's light novels are undoubtedly excellent, but that's all, they neither go beyond the limitations of the subject matter nor break through the original scope of light novels.

"Huh...that's how it is."

Closing the light novel in his hand, Kasumigaoka Shiyu closed his eyes and sighed deeply.

Maybe it was the prosperous life from childhood to adulthood that made her a little proud of her character, so that she could not see such an obvious problem clearly, which was really inappropriate.

However, she was lucky.

Because she met Xia Yan.

Slowly opening his eyes, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's ruby-like eyes stared directly at Mo Yan, and the light in his eyes flowed like a clear spring 3.3.

If Xia Yan were an ordinary person, she would probably have been dazed by the girl in front of her.

In all fairness, even from his point of view, he must admit that Shiyu of Kasumigaoka is a beautiful girl.

More importantly, this beautiful girl also has an interesting soul, not a wooden beauty.

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